The Characteristics of Fluidity and Transparency in Art and Architecture
Architecture is not only an object to let people stay, but also includes the elements of culture, technique and art. Nowadays the characteristic of fluidity and transparency becomes a concept in architecture or other design works. Architects and designers are not with limits of the traditional order of Euclidean geometries of sphere, cube, or cone and etc. (There is a gap between this and next sentence. Bridge these two ideas.) More softer or natural forms are used in shapes, to create a specific atmosphere of the space or to reflect the profound characteristics of society or culture. For instance, the TWA terminal of Kennedy Airport in New York designed by Eero Saarinen, the fluid shape express the images of flight and speed. This kind of design is a current trend and also creates several interesting ideas (What are these?) and inspires people’s imagination. (You are a good writer. Your expressions are very elaborated. However, the sentences in this introduction sound choppy and separated from each other. First of all, you need to provide the definitions of fluidity and transparency. (So how will you develop this paper? Can you provide a map to the whole paper? What are your foci?)
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Yi-Hsuan's feedback:
When reading your paper, I enjoyed it a lot. It's well organized and illustrated. Although you only provided three pictures in your paper, I could use my imagination to visualize the rest of artwork you mentioned in the paper through your "fluid and transparent" description. Good job.
Yun-Sun's feedback:
The contents is very attentive and interesting~ I can understand your writing Easily, reader-friendly. But I am little hesitated, you consequently focused on the architecture or both or architecture and art. If you want to focus on the both of them, I think you need some explainnation in the introduction why you talk about both of them.
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